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THE THIRTY-MINUTE COUNTDOWN / Chapter 1 / 15

Chapter 1 - The Woman on the Floor

Three hours earlier, Jocelyn Hale stood in the kitchen with one hand gripping the edge of the counter.

A violent pain twisted beneath her ribs.

She closed her eyes and waited for it to pass.

It did not.

For the past six weeks, she had been waking with nausea, dizziness, and a deep ache in her abdomen. At first, she blamed the long shifts at St. Matthew’s Medical Center. Jocelyn was a highly respected cardiothoracic surgeon, but respect did not protect her from exhaustion. She often worked sixteen-hour days, slept four hours, and returned to the hospital before sunrise.

Yet this pain was different.

It felt sharp.

Dangerous.

Her phone rang.

It was the diagnostic clinic.

“Dr. Hale,” the receptionist said, “Dr. Patel reviewed your imaging. He wants you here immediately.”

Jocelyn glanced at the clock.

Her appointment was scheduled for two that afternoon.

“Immediately?”

“Yes. He marked it urgent. He said you should not drive yourself if the pain has worsened.”

Jocelyn’s pulse quickened.

Before she could respond, the front door opened.

Rita swept into the house wearing oversized sunglasses and a cream-colored coat despite the warm weather. Gordon followed behind her, scrolling through his phone.

Rita placed three shopping catalogs on the table.

“Jocelyn, get your things. We’re leaving in ten minutes.”

Jocelyn slowly lowered the phone.

“I have a medical appointment.”

Rita removed her sunglasses.

“So reschedule it.”

“I can’t.”

“You reschedule surgeries for rich donors all the time.”

“I don’t reschedule surgeries for donors.”

Rita waved dismissively.

“Whatever you call it. I need to go to Bellamy’s before they close the private showroom.”

Gordon finally looked up.

“Mom has been waiting all week for that handbag.”

Jocelyn stared at her husband.

“The clinic just called. They said I need to come in immediately.”

Gordon sighed as though she had interrupted something important.

“Then go after we shop.”

“The doctor said it may be serious.”

Rita picked up the envelope containing Jocelyn’s medical reports.

“You doctors always make everything sound serious.”

“Please give me those.”

Rita opened the envelope and glanced at the first page without understanding it.

“What is this? More tests?”

“Give it back.”

Rita smiled.

Then she dropped the papers onto the floor.

A few sheets slid beneath the dining table.

“Nobody cares about your little doctor’s appointment. Pick them up and drive me shopping.”

Jocelyn looked down at the reports.

Something inside her went still.

For years, she had confused silence with patience. She had mistaken endurance for loyalty. She had allowed Gordon to call her selfish whenever she worked late, even though her income paid for the house, his failed businesses, Rita’s rent, and every luxury they enjoyed.

She had accepted apologies that came without change.

She had ignored bank statements because Gordon said handling the finances gave him purpose.

She had let Rita enter their home without knocking because Gordon insisted that his mother had sacrificed everything for him.

Now Jocelyn could barely stand, and neither of them cared enough to notice.

She bent to retrieve the papers.

Pain tore through her abdomen.

She gasped and fell to one knee.

Gordon pointed toward the front door.

“Don’t act like you’re dying. You’re making a fool of yourself.”

Jocelyn looked up at him.

There was no concern in his face.

Only irritation.

“The doctor said it was urgent.”

Rita laughed.

“Urgent? The only urgent thing is getting my designer bag back before someone richer buys it.”

Gordon smirked.

“Your job is to pay. That’s what you’re best at.”

The words landed more cleanly than any insult before them.

Not wife.

Not partner.

Not person.

Pay.

Jocelyn slowly stood.

She wiped one tear from her cheek.

Then she smiled.

“You’re right.”

Rita’s expression brightened.

“Finally, you know your place.”

Jocelyn picked up her car keys.

“Go inside. Shop to your heart’s content.”

Rita clapped her hands.

“Now this is truly the ATM machine I married my son into.”

Gordon chuckled.

Jocelyn slipped her credit card into her wallet without either of them noticing.

May you like

“Enjoy the next thirty minutes,” she whispered.

Then she drove away alone.

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