Chapter 8 - The Empty Hotel Room)

Alison was already running when the connection died.
Vega caught her at the church door. “You cannot reach the hotel before my units.”
“My daughter is there.”
“And if Gregory wants you to rush in alone, that is exactly why.”
Two unmarked cars sped toward downtown. Alison sat in the back seat beside Celia, calling Naomi again and again. Every attempt went to voicemail. The hotel’s front desk said a fire alarm had forced guests from the fourth and fifth floors fifteen minutes earlier. The alarm had been cleared as a malfunction.
Abigail’s room was on the fifth floor.
Police locked down the hotel. Officers searched stairwells, service corridors, elevators, and the parking garage. Vega took Alison upstairs after the room had been cleared.
The door showed no damage. Naomi’s laptop remained open on the desk. Her phone lay on the carpet beside a spilled cup of coffee. One chair had been knocked over.
Abigail’s backpack was gone.
On the bathroom mirror, someone had written a message with soap.
BRING THE DRIVE. COME ALONE.
Alison pressed both hands against the sink because the room had begun to tilt.
Vega spoke into her radio. “Two victims missing. Issue citywide alert. Pull every camera from the lobby, loading area, and adjacent streets.”
Celia looked at the open door. “This is Victor. Gregory likes documents. Victor likes fear.”
“Then help us find where he took them,” Alison said.
The hotel cameras showed the evacuation in fragments. A man wearing a maintenance uniform opened a fire panel on the fifth floor. Naomi and Abigail exited through the stairwell with other guests. In the lobby, a woman in a paramedic jacket approached Naomi and pointed toward the service entrance. The camera angle did not reveal her face.
Outside, a white medical transport van waited in the alley. Naomi and Abigail entered it without resistance. The van’s license plate belonged to a vehicle in Kenosha.
“She told them I was hurt,” Alison said. “That is the only reason Abby would go.”
An officer found Naomi’s second phone beneath the bed. She used it only for court work, and Gregory apparently had not known about it. The device contained an unfinished text addressed to Alison.
FIRE ALARM. WOMAN SAYS VEGA SENT HER. ABBY REMEMBERED THE BUS RULE. TRUST HER.
“What bus rule?” Vega asked.
Alison remembered Darnell handing Abigail the transfer. If the place at one end is wrong, stay on until you find a safe stop.
“Abigail knew the woman was lying,” Alison said. “Naomi wanted me to know she had a plan.”
They replayed the alley video frame by frame. As Abigail climbed into the van, she stumbled and placed one hand against the brick wall. Something white remained after she moved away.
An officer searched the alley and found the bus transfer wedged into a crack. On the back, beneath Darnell’s number, Abigail had written KESTREL in purple pencil.
She had heard the kidnappers mention the brewery.
Vega ordered surveillance around the Kestrel complex but warned officers not to enter until they confirmed the hostages’ location. The property covered six buildings linked by tunnels and enclosed bridges. A careless raid could place Naomi and Abigail in greater danger.
At eleven thirty in the morning, Gregory called Alison.
“Let me hear her.”
“You are not in a position to make demands.”
“Let me hear Abigail, or there is no exchange.”
The line rustled. Abigail’s voice came faintly. “Mom, I’m okay.”
“Are you with Naomi?”
“Yes.”
A man in the background ordered her to stop talking.
Abigail raised her voice quickly. “The room has three moons, but I can’t see the sky.”
The call shifted back to Gregory.
“Drive and all copies. Nine tonight. I will send the entrance.”
“Release them first.”
“No.”
“The police have the drive.”
“Then get it back.”
“You know I can’t.”
“You have a talented lawyer. Find a reason. If you fail, Victor files the deeds, takes the passage, and makes certain Abigail remembers what your stubbornness cost.”
He ended the call.
Three moons meant the round windows in Abigail’s drawing. She and Naomi were somewhere inside the old accounting building Celia had described.
Vega created a tactical plan. The digital unit would clone the drive and place a tracker inside a matching shell. Celia would contact Gregory and claim she still had access to a second set of notarized originals. Alison would appear willing to sign. Officers would enter through utility tunnels shown on Thomas Reed’s map.
“No,” Celia said after studying the map. “This tunnel is sealed. Victor had concrete poured here last winter.”
“What about the side door?”
“The key card will open it, but cameras cover the corridor.”
Alison traced the Reed passage north to the brewery. A narrow spur ended beneath the accounting building.
“My father marked a service hatch,” she said. “It may still exist.”
Vega compared the century-old survey with current utility records. The spur aligned with a stormwater channel beneath the alley. A tactical team could approach unseen, but only if the hatch had not been sealed.
The plan offered a chance, not certainty.
At three in the afternoon, officers recovered the medical van abandoned near the Menomonee River. Inside they found Naomi’s coat, a broken zip tie, and one purple plastic flower from Abigail’s headband.
Under the flower was a tiny folded note.
May you like
Naomi had written five words.
Gregory is not in control.