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THE DOCTOR’S ONE SENTENCE / Chapter 1 / 15

Chapter 1 - The House With No Locked Doors

Three weeks earlier, Natalie woke before sunrise to the sound of someone opening her bedroom door.

She did not move.

She had learned not to move too quickly in Diane Mercer’s house.

The hinges gave a soft groan. Bare feet crossed the carpet. A shadow passed over the wall.

Natalie kept her eyes closed and counted the steps.

One.

Two.

Three.

The mattress shifted near her feet.

A hand lifted the edge of the blanket.

Natalie’s body tightened.

Then Diane whispered, “Still sleeping.”

The older woman remained beside the bed for several seconds before turning away.

The door closed without clicking shut.

Natalie waited until the hallway floorboards stopped creaking. Only then did she open her eyes.

Beside her, Mark slept with his back turned, one arm hanging over the edge of the mattress. His breathing was slow and heavy. He had not noticed his mother enter.

Or he had noticed and did not care.

Natalie quietly sat up.

The digital clock read 5:12 a.m.

She pulled the blanket around her shoulders and stared at the bedroom door. Diane had removed its lock months earlier.

“A family shouldn’t hide from one another,” she had said.

Mark had agreed.

In Diane’s house, no door locked except Diane’s study.

The bathroom did not lock.

The bedroom did not lock.

Even the small room Natalie used as a home office had a latch that could be opened from the hallway with a coin.

Only Diane was allowed privacy.

Natalie slipped from bed and walked to the mirror.

A purple mark darkened her upper arm where Diane had pinched her the previous evening. The bruise looked like a fingerprint.

She covered it with the sleeve of her robe.

Downstairs, the house was silent.

The Mercer residence stood at the end of a private road outside Bellhaven, surrounded by bare oak trees and a stone wall taller than Natalie. It had belonged to Mark’s grandfather, a respected surgeon who had founded a chain of private medical clinics.

After his death, the house passed to Diane.

Everything inside remained exactly as she wanted it.

The clocks chimed at the same minute.

The silverware faced the same direction.

The framed family photographs contained no image of Natalie unless Mark happened to be standing beside her.

Even the kitchen pantry was arranged according to Diane’s handwritten labels.

Natalie began preparing breakfast.

Eggs for Mark.

Black coffee for Diane.

Toast cut diagonally, never straight.

At 5:45, footsteps sounded behind her.

“You’re using the wrong pan.”

Natalie turned.

Diane stood in the doorway wearing a dark blue robe. Her silver hair was pinned perfectly behind her head despite the early hour.

“This is the pan Mark likes,” Natalie said.

Diane approached the stove and lifted the lid.

“You used butter.”

“He asked for butter yesterday.”

“He says things to avoid hurting your feelings.”

Natalie lowered her eyes.

Diane leaned closer.

“You should know your husband better.”

“I’ll remake them.”

“You’ll waste food again?”

Natalie switched off the burner.

“No.”

“Then serve him what you made.”

Diane walked to the coffee machine, inspected the cup Natalie had prepared, and poured it into the sink.

Natalie watched the black liquid disappear down the drain.

“What was wrong with it?”

“Too weak.”

“It was two full scoops.”

“Are you arguing?”

Natalie felt the familiar pressure in her chest.

“No.”

Diane smiled.

“That’s what I thought.”

Mark entered fifteen minutes later, dressed for work in a charcoal suit. He kissed his mother on the cheek before sitting at the table.

Natalie placed the plate in front of him.

He took one bite and frowned.

“You used too much butter.”

Diane said nothing.

Natalie looked at her.

The older woman calmly drank her coffee.

“I can make something else,” Natalie said.

Mark pushed the plate away.

“I’m already late.”

He stood and picked up his briefcase.

Natalie followed him into the hallway.

“Mark, I need the car today.”

“For what?”

“My appointment.”

“What appointment?”

“I told you last week. The specialist.”

Mark sighed.

“Natalie, we’ve been through this.”

“The pain is getting worse.”

“My mother said it’s anxiety.”

“Your mother isn’t my doctor.”

His expression hardened.

Diane appeared behind him.

“She has more medical knowledge than most doctors you’ve seen.”

Diane had worked as a surgical nurse decades earlier. She mentioned it whenever Natalie questioned her.

Mark adjusted his cuff.

“Reschedule it.”

“I already rescheduled twice.”

“Then call a taxi.”

“My card was declined yesterday.”

Mark did not look surprised.

“I lowered the limit.”

“Why?”

“You’ve been spending too much.”

“I bought groceries.”

“My mother buys groceries.”

“Then why am I paying for them?”

Diane stepped between them.

“This constant interrogation is exhausting him.”

Natalie stared at Mark.

“I only need enough money to see a doctor.”

He opened the front door.

“We’ll talk tonight.”

“You always say that.”

Mark stopped.

For one brief second, Natalie believed he might turn around and apologize.

Instead, he leaned close enough that she smelled mint on his breath.

“Do not embarrass me in front of my mother.”

Then he left.

The sound of his car disappeared beyond the gate.

Diane remained in the hallway.

“You should be careful,” she said.

Natalie folded her arms over herself.

“About what?”

“Pushing him too far.”

“I asked for a doctor.”

“You asked for attention.”

Diane walked past her, brushing Natalie’s shoulder.

Something sharp touched Natalie’s skin.

She gasped.

When she looked down, a tiny red point appeared above her wrist.

Diane held a sewing needle between two fingers.

“You startled me,” Diane said.

Natalie stared at the needle.

“Why are you carrying that?”

“I was repairing a button.”

“There’s no thread.”

Diane’s eyes narrowed.

“Are you accusing me of something?”

Natalie stepped back.

“No.”

“Good.”

Diane placed the needle inside the pocket of her robe.

Then she walked upstairs.

Natalie stood alone in the hallway, pressing her thumb over the small bead of blood.

That afternoon, she found a metal tin beneath the kitchen sink.

It contained dozens of long sewing needles.

Some were clean.

Some were darkened near the tips.

And beneath them lay a folded piece of paper with Natalie’s weekly schedule written in Diane’s handwriting.

Every hour had been accounted for.

May you like

At the bottom of the page, beside Friday night, Diane had written two words.

Final correction.

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